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* Updating reblogging tumblr style for any who missed it over the weekend. You guys are always saying how things get lost in your inbox. OTL


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About this Comic: For new viewers


"Everything Under the Stars" is my original science fiction romance story between a human girl and an alien. She is abducted from present day Earth and sold as a slave on a multicultural alien occupied space station. Please check out the links below for more information.


Finally finished another page... OTL

I'm so tired right now so if there are any mistakes, I'll fix them tomorrow.

I also only originally intended for there to be four pages before I upload the written chapter, but I didn't realize how much space all the panels would take up, and I haven't even scanned in one page, or finished drawing the last couple panels for the conclusion of this scene... so there will be at least one more page for this scene. Probably two more pages to go before I post the written version (as I want to illustrate the first moments of the second scene, too). If that doesn't make any sense, I'm tired.

And this page is legit, guys. Just in case anyone had any doubts because of the April Fools thing. My Stream posse can vouch for that since they saw most of these panels ahead of time. :sleep:

Oh, and some music for the mood of the comic: www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ipg-lS…




:bulletgreen: Written Version: Chapter One

:bulletgreen: Written Version: Chapter Twenty

:bulletgreen: Story Hub: All Written Chapters

:bulletgreen: EUTS Art Gallery and Story Info



:bulletgreen: Click thumbnail to read their story: Everything Under the Stars
Everything Under the Stars by Lady-Owl EUTS - Ch21:The Underground - Comic Page 1 by Lady-Owl EUTS - Ch21:The Underground - Comic Page 2 by Lady-Owl



:bulletgreen: Materials Drawn with Pencil on Vellum Bristol 9x12 | Photoshop 5.0 (1998 version) | Wacom Intuos 5 Touch artist tablet


:bulletgreen: Everything Under the Stars © Lady-Owl & H-Falcon | Art © Lady Owl 2013 | Tumblr | Twitter | This shouldn't need to be said but, please do not redistribute, claim, copy, reproduce, edit, or use in any way without my permission. Thank you.
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:iconninufaa:
ninufaa Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
oh god YES.
I absolutely love the way you drew Gale in the panel where he adjusts his hoodie. The fingers on his right hand blew my mind away Love 
And what's this? Tess you sneaky minx cupid you :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   General Artist
Haha, thanks ninufaa! And did you mean his right or our right?
And oh yes, Tes has some mischievous intentions with this. =p
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ninufaa Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014
Sorry! Should have made it more specific.
I meant our right, his left (confusing for me to differentiate)
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:iconelreniagreenleaf:
ElreniaGreenleaf Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's such a little detail but I love how you've used the lighting to accentuate Gale's fur in the second last panel!
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   General Artist
Thank you, Elrenia. I need to practice it more since I only get it to my liking about half of the time. OTL
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MetalSnail Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool!
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   General Artist
n_n thank you, MetalSnail.
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gorga Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice... I wish I could afford to commission you for some art for my book...
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   General Artist
Thank you. I have commissions at all prices. If you're interested, we can discuss things through notes?
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:iconphilosopherpariah:
PhilosopherPariah Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Poor Gale, he is so lonely and unsexed.
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   General Artist
Unsexed as in virgin? Perhaps.
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:iconphilosopherpariah:
PhilosopherPariah Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I didn't mean necessarily a virgin, perhaps just a dry spell. But virgin could be.
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PhilosopherPariah Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I see, I see ;) interesting
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AZREAL258 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
This feels a little awkward...I like it. 
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014   General Artist
;p
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Aerazura Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Oooh and the mystery intensifies! I love the lighting in here. Dusty and grungy with an industrial edge makes me feel like this club could be one of the more dangerous ones. I love the expressions yet again too. Gale looks quite guilty and maybe even nervous about whats (about to?) happen. I also have to say that Heather looks so pretty in the third panel down. She also seems to feel the same about clubs as I do. XD I like it when you link songs to reflect the mood or atmosphere of what your scene is about.
Can't wait to see more, LO!
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Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014   General Artist
Aww, thank you, RP and yup, it's definitely not a safe place for Heather to be, and for that matter... Oh it's difficult to keep hush hush about everything. /zips up

I have to admit, I'm really curious in how everyone seems to be interpreting the comic. I'm getting the vibe that everyone is reading it in the exact opposite of what it was supposed to be XD (though that is understandable - without the text of the actual story, no one knows what anyone is thinking).

Heather doesn't mind Muora's club, but lol yeah, this one, nope. Nope nope. As cool as it is to visit in my mind, I wouldn't feel any more comfortable in that place, either. =p I'm also really glad you enjoy the music links. I'm never sure if anyone even clicks them most of the time.
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Aerazura Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
Ah now that makes me wonder if Gale has some bad news or maybe wanted heather alone so he could tell her something about Neelix that she doesn't but needs to know. Oooooo this chapter can't get here fast enough!
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Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   General Artist
Heh, I just need to finish up two more pages and finish writing the ending of Ch21 before I can post it. I'm doing my best to get the pages finished in a timely manner! :O

As for Gale, if you remember the events in the previous chapter (I know it has been so long OTL), it might make a little more sense what is going on here. c:
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Aerazura Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
I was actually planning on going back to reread! So exciting to hear you're getting close to finishing the last chapter.
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Writer
Heh, love how this turned out.  Seems like Gale might have a few things to say to Heather, judging by his expression in the last panel.
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Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
Oh that last panel turned out so awkward, lol. I think things will make sense with the next page... or, probably the written version. OTL
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ShuyinTheEnigmatic Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Writer
All aboard the awkward train!  XD

Should be pretty interesting to see how this all turns out.
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Lostkavi Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
*is all giddy and stuff* >:3
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
Well, like, I dunno what you're all giddy for because you didn't actually say (and you know me by now that I like to know what you like). D:<
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Lostkavi Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
Oh, I'm a simpleton. I just mean that you've finished this piece and it's all pretty and wonderful, and that there's now more on the horizon :3
That said - not sure I like where this one's going ._. (Not saying that that's a bad thing. well it is a bad thing, that's hwy I don't like it...but I do like it, oh i'll just go over to the fail corner now...>.<)
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
Lol, so what are your thoughts of what may happen?
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Lostkavi Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
I don't know yet. I'm just getting...vibes. Negative vibes. I can feel the shitstorm building on the horizon like a porridge tsunami
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
lol, I can't deny that.
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Owlbear33 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
woop,
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
There is a comma there, as if there was gonna be something more awesome than just a "woop" being said. ;p
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Owlbear33 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
there was and then i couldn't decide what to put, then i was a twit and forgot to remove the comma, but in any case awesome to see comic.
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
Yup, he feels very guilty.
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:iconajinu-okami:
AJInu-Okami Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Dun dun DUN!
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praxcrown5 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work!  Again, love the scene and the expressions. 

One can't help but wonder why Gale looks so guilty... :D
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xTwilightWingsx Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
His "Sorry about the music" , made me imagine what alien music would sound like. Instruments we've never heard of, deeper and higher sounds we can't hear and all that jazz =D
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Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
Heh, that line was intended because it's so loud, lol but I love that it made you think of actual alien music. I usually do think of Gale, Neelix, and Veeno being more sensitive with their senses than a human, so higher and deeper sounds is a great concept. But since I don't have actual alien music to go with this, I just kept with the electronic industrial feel.
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MurraMyrrh Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014   Digital Artist
:dance: So light intensive! :la: I just want to dance! Man, it looked great on the stream before, but it's even more beautiful here because I can see all those little details I couldn't see in the stream. Oh man, I cannot wait see the rest. ^_^
I particularly like the lights and shadows on Gale's fur. I know there isn't a lot of Tess, but he's so much more rough than her. 
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
I'm glad the comic still gives off the feel of wanting to dance. I've been working on it so long that the buzz of flashing club lights and thumping music, has worn off a little.

Yeah, LS res can suck for details, and do you mean rougher as in the line art? Because the panels from Gale "half" lying to Heather and down, were all scanned with a different scanner. It seems to pick up things better, but also shows the sketchiness of the lines more since I'm not going all full out polished lines for this - that would take me even longer. ;__; But I like the look a lot, especially for these scenes since it's supposed to be grungy and low class compared to Muora's club.
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MurraMyrrh Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Digital Artist
Lol I meant as in roughed up, spiky or tufts of fur. Tess looks cleen, smooth, and perfectly groomed. Gale looks like he's on edge or at least tired from work. Scanners, bleg. But I have no idea what clubs are supposed to look like. The club does look more "grungy" though, because Tess is leaning on a wood box and the booth Gale and Heather sit in reminds me of old diner booths. I mean, Muora has way more respect and class to have that stuff be a part of his decor. I mean, he even has that awesome DJ guy! Plus this club looks more "smokey." Over all I think you did a really good job on making it look low class, even though I have no idea what a low class club looks like...Heh. ^_^
I might be the only one, but I actually like the sketchy lines I can kinda see a little (no thanks to the scanner). Sketch lines just have a charm to them for me.
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doug7070 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great update. The lighting in these scenes continues to look really cool.
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:iconlady-owl:
Lady-Owl Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   General Artist
Thank you, Doug. Playing with lighting and colors is one of my favorite things about doing a club scene like this. 
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